Week 9, Take 2!!
WATCH WEEK 9.5 WIP
Due to server issues we get another crack at week 9. In short week 9 is a DO OVER. This gives everyone a chance to get an extra week of work done or AM said we can hand in the same assignment we handed in on the real week 9, last week. I made some changes to my assignment from the great crit I got from Anthony Wong, our sub. I am not sure if it is totally working but I think I am heading in the right direction. I am going to have to move into linear this week. That is a very scary step for me, things seem to get all messed up when you move out of blocking and into linear and then splined. We will see how it goes!
posted by anthea @ 11:30 AM
2 Comments:
Hey Anthea! Awesome work so far! Don't stress about the smoothing, just take it one body part at a time, and with two weeks to go, you'll do great! :-)
I really love how she darts forward on "everything". Very entertaining! The gestures are looking great, really cool choices! I think the hand sweep on "friends and family" might be a little too similar to "horse drawn carriage"... maybe she could work in the previous pose there, or work more with her head? Just a guess. It took me several viewings to notice the semi-repetition, so maybe I'm way off base.
The one thing that did jump out at me was what her right hand does around 119. In super-slow mo it looks like a good idea, but at speed it looks like a hitch... that could probably be a smoother motion given how fast it needs to be.
Small stuff, this blocking is looking fabooo, just gotta get it cleaned up! ;-) Great work!
Hey I love how this ones turning out! Keep goin!
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